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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
declared loathsome ignored as dead became a butterfly free |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
They only THOUGHT it looked like a dried out piece of bark, never realizing the beauty inside the cocoon.... wonderful! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
with half a chance and a sprig of hope beautiful! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
just a reminder for us to make sure to look beyond. . . great job Logan. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Now this was different! Strong message in a very small and potent "thought-pill". -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You know I love this...what a surprise too....smiling and shaking my head, lovie...yer wonderful!!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Logan, very thoughtful, and I like the form. ALways something to think about, even in such few words. Sandra |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Simply... perfect! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that spoke volumes, yes a butterfly, but what of people ignored and the beauty within never being shared. Logan, you amaze me when you hurt my brain this way! Well done sir. ~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~ |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Loved it Logan, We all hold something great inside the trick is bringing it to the surface. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Sunshine, very gentle smile. thank you, Sissie, for I knew you would understand.. Isn't that all it really takes, Virginia? just a sprig of hope?..thank you for your comment and read..very gentle smile Thank you, Sven, my friend..gentle smile. we should look closer, shouldn't we? Thank you for your read, Mark, and yes, a bit different..glad you liked what I tried..gentle smile Ahh, Serenity..your words are always welcome, but maybe I was lucky on this one...very gentle smile Sandra, very gentle smile..you are always so thoughtful and so kind to keep replying..thank you for being here. Thank you, Tier, you are so kind and make me smile with gratitude...very gentle smile Ahh, Mysteria, my good friend, was I REALLY talking about butterflies?..very gentle smile Shadow, gentle smile, thank you for being here and giving a read..and yes we do, don't we? |
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