Open Poetry #15 |
Somethings die before they're born |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Coccons in the leaves show potential of becoming butterflies But some wither away with the sunlight Somethings die before they're born Growing strong huge belly beating fast But one day no heart beat it's paralized stuck in time Must be remove from it's mom Somethings die before they're born Little dry beans spread in mud Just add water and they'll grow But sometimes it happens sometimes it don't Somethings die before they're born. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
this is a very sade piece, I hope their's nothing going on in your life that prompted it, but if there is, I pray for your strength through it |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
why? this is the obvious question. . . but, the other question is. . . was it their time?? good thoughts here walker. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, and somethings are reborn, and that's the beauty of life! (I think) "It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Wonderful write of things that usually are shied away from..my thoughts? gentle smile, they will be reborn with a greater capacity to be what they will be, it is not yet their time for glory.. |
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