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samt Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 52Brisbane |
I am not a good poet, I am learning. But this is the way I was feeling at the time I wrote it. It is to a beauty that I made so many foolish mistakes, simply because I was jealous and thought she was sleeping around. I was such a fool and will never listen to others again. ONLY LISTEN TO YOUR HEART EVERYONE, for it lead me to her. I am sorry and I Love you forever Meg. Oh how I wish you would see my pure loving heart the one you once loved so much the heart you once adored. I am so sorry for my foolishness I can only apoligise My silly words, stupid actions the pain and anger inside my soul leans to you for forgivness but you push my away slam the door and throw the key I still wait at bay. wanted your friendship at first I did wanted more of course for your tender heart and loving beauty is so damm hard to ignore I love you with all my heart even remembering my mistakes I acted out of jealousy, I am so ashamed all of those mistakes my tears speak aloud every night and day I will be miserable for a long long way so my heart speaks to you are you listening I ask my heart I give to you will you just walk past I ask for another chance to show you the real my heart you once touched you once held so close please I ask for one more for I have learned so much my soul cannot rest until I show you again the beautiful heart I once had the heart you thought that 'he could be the one' my heart I shall show if you truely see it you will then only know, you can make your decision on something other than jealous me for my heart you will see my Love I will show I can tell you my Love, we will simply be |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well.. this is certainly expressive!! don't know that any of us are truly "good poets" and don't think it matters a whole lot..we just keep trying..just keep writing... looking forward to seeing you do the same... |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
Sam, we are all learning and always will  You have just expressed your feelings in a way that I understand and I look forward to reading more and watching you grow as a poet.Maeve Take me home to Erin's shores, |
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samt Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 52Brisbane |
Cpat Hair, Thankyou, your comment means more than you can imagine and I will keep writing, I hope you do too, Thanks. Maeve, We are learning, but is it too late? It is great that you understand this very....well...hearty poem, thankyou very much. Your poetry is beautiful, I truely admire you. Keep writing Sam |
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