Open Poetry #15 |
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Destiny's Kiss |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you ![]() |
Having found you, my heart’s one wish come true I am brought to believe in destiny I now know the need in my soul, was you ever waiting for love’s discovery To blossom into a sweet forever promising a future of passion bliss found in the bounty of friendship’s splendor no emotion felt ,was greater than this Nurtured by trust and dulcet honesty we come together in this, the garden of our hearts, making dreams ~ reality enchanting, granting quiet prayers spoken and it is here, where our hearts shall remain drinking in the richness of fate’s champagne ~SEA~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Lovely, SEA...hopefully 'tis you 'drinking in the richness of fate’s champagne'... jwesley |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
May you always have those "bubbles", very romantic Mrs. Sea. To see real beauty ~ look with your heart |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
A beautiful, romantic poem and I enjoyed it so much! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Sea, may the garden in your heart blossom all year round, and the lovers among it sip their champagne of fate toasting love. A lovely romantic peom Sea, much enjoyed. Rick |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
lovely and very romantic...you do these very well... as usual.. I enjoyed a great deal |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You're kicking these sonnets out like a rabbit having babies....and you're doing a mighty fine job of them, too! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Nurtured by trust and dulcet honesty we come together in this, the garden of our hearts, making dreams ~ reality enchanting, granting quiet prayers spoken and it is here, where our hearts shall remain drinking in the richness of fate’s champagne ============================= Any one ever tell ya love becomes you ![]() this is beautiful, in both poetic inspire and hearts intend. well done poetess Sea-girlie We're all feeding our lonely...like it might go away... |
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Poet Unknown Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140Missouri |
wow wish i could write that good, very nice poem, really heart felt and it came across with a lot of heart put into it Only darkness falls on those without souls |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Sea such a beautiful write! May you always be blessed with the overflowing feeling of love! Hugs Cindi |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA- Yet another beautiful treasure from your pen. Your happiness makes me smile. ![]() Wonderfully done. ![]() Hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Beautifully done SEA~ Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World Is Ever Really Lost All Things Beloved Live on In Our Hearts...Forever." [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 08-14-2001).] |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Susan, Your writing is sooo amazing. You constantly top yourself.. over and over. How do you it? lol. I love this.. so soft and beautiful. ![]() TaraB |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Never could we say that you don't shine in the inspire of love. Beautiful sharing of a heart that knows the power and security of a true love in it's arms. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
A lovely toast to that commitment. May you always drink in that which began the flow of your lives together. Sincerely, Regina |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"and it is here, where our hearts shall remain drinking in the richness of fate’s champagne" Wonderfully romantic Susan ... beautifully descriptive sentiments, and the closing couplet is so sweetly phrased, much enjoyed! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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