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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-08-17 04:42 PM


Eternity


Love said to me...

"Go home and tell your loved ones
that love has a need to roam and be free.

Yet when love finds the place it belongs
it will stay for eternity."


Jameslee@August17,2001


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Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-08-17 04:58 PM



Love....is very right about this.

Well done Sir.

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2 posted 2001-08-17 05:17 PM


ah wisdom ... and such wisdom it is...

nicely done... I enjoyed!

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3 posted 2001-08-18 01:49 AM


JamesMichael~
This is brilliant~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-08-18 03:39 AM


Thank you Lady, Cpat and Marge for the nice response...James
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5 posted 2001-08-18 07:13 AM


True, and nicely said.
Sandra

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6 posted 2001-08-18 09:35 AM


Very nicely phrased indeed James, much enjoyed your thoughts in this.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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7 posted 2001-08-18 09:38 AM


This has a Blake-ish tone


He who binds to himself a joy
Does the winged life destroy
But he who kisses the joy as it flies
Lives in eternity's sun rise


well done


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