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The Battle Field
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The Battle Field |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Battle Field Exits lay Just beyond the Glass filled Metal arcades Like giant Standing Pasquinade. I feel my way On crutch and pen Though quick sand of Empathy’s madness Of bravados glen And sadness. Yet and still Beyond This dole Stays yet Another Toll. Eternity titillates the mind Flower and fragrant of every kind How many portals do mortals mast? To cast the goal of soul at last |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
brilliant Seymore |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May you always cross one more portal, Sy.... Always. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh my ... this is excellent Sy! What a wonderful format and rhyme you've penned to capture these sentiments so masterfully, well done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
The attainment of the knowledge gleaned from the experiences of myriad others, as we do here is both enlightening and maddening. The balance can be precarious to tiptoe through the absorbtion of it all but the end result quite satisfying. Enjoyed. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Local Rebel, Thank yo so much. Sunshine, Thank you love. Kit, From you well done weighs heavy, thank you. RSWells, Excellent comment, thank you. |
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citizenx Member
since 2001-07-31
Posts 189motorcade |
Exits lay Just beyond the Glass filled Metal arcades Like giant Standing Pasquinade. Seymour, the chaos of conflict brilliantly captured. Very impressive images. Filed safely in my library. "the blizzard of the world has crossed the threshold and it has overturned |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Masterfully done Seymour! Great format and presented so very well!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Eternity titillates the mind Flower and fragrant of every kind How many portals do mortals mast? To cast the goal of soul at last ================================== your poetry is a portal on your soul and that is a very very worthy goal. *winkiewinkie*  meFeels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Citizenx, An impressive comment, thank you Ethome, I am touched, thank you JM, And you are my Tinkerbell. Love ya Sy |
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