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Love beyond Perception ................... first poem / 78
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Love beyond Perception ................... first poem / 78 |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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Love beyond Perception ~~~~~~~~~ Two soul mates part "nothing lasts forever" I doubt we'll ever meet again "I love you ... there will be no other" this parting fills my heart with pain ~ You heart is drifting so I release you a cheerful past can I forget Though I may wander life in sorrow my prayers are that you're happy yet ~ Perhaps in time on a lonely evening your thoughts will reminisce of me And wonder if I'm even living that night I'll think the same of thee ~ Through this lonesome life I wander alone with thoughts of only you Your memory blinds my sight forever with love far greater than you knew ~ When slowly all your friends depart you those friends you thought you needed so Bare in mind the friend you departed still loves you greater than you know ~~~ In the mood I was in, I spent a long time writing and rewriting this poem ... It's been tweaked a bit over the years but the original feelings still lay within |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and they still show through. . . well done Rex. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Indeed, a very loving write, and so well penned. To know this kind of love is a gift. Sincerely, Regina |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
How sad to lose a soulmate. But you aren't feeling sorry for yourself, since you were mature enough to hold those special memories close to your heart for comfort. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Perhaps in time on a lonely evening your thoughts will reminisce of me And wonder if I'm even living that night I'll think the same of thee ~ Through this lonesome life I wander alone with thoughts of only you Your memory blinds my sight forever with love far greater than you knew ============================= Rex this is LOVELY, a beautiful bittersweet inspire. the vocab and poetic phrasing is perfect. and its so nice to see you back here with us  I know no one is to blame |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hi there Rexie Well I've been wandering round this internet space for a while now and not been to passions in ages, came in for a peek to see if any of my old buddies were still here and Yep they are....how nice Yours is the first I read and what an emotional write it is, I really enjoyed it. Well my friend I can't guarantee I'll be sticking around for long but I hope everyone knows that I'm always thinking of them and passions. ~HUGS~ always Have a great day...Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thankyou Sven ... I think it was the most emotional piece I've written Regina ... I guess I got lucky ... my second and present wife is my true love ... 20 years The blindness of love for my first wife lost, was not apparent till the second dawned Midnitesun ... I thought so ... then I got bitter ... now, I try to look at it as a learning experience Thankyou Janet ... I enjoy the time I'm able to spend here every now and again tracie ... you are a sweetheart ... I just came back myself, so all I can say is ... great to hear from you and I'm sure I speak for all when I say " Post us something girl" You're too good to go unread |
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