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Open Poetry #15

He touches ... tender

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2001-08-11 03:25 AM

He touches ... tender

with the touch of
tender
he traces ... pale
until her breath
rises and swells
consuming the
color he paints
hues of love
embed themselves
into the flesh
crying
for mercy
tentatively she gives in
her head falling to the
side
away from his eyes
away from ... fate
this moment
now ... palm to hardened
peak,
arch and press
moan and release
he touches ... tender
where secrets lie beneath
the story of a fallen soul
now soaring high above
this woman ...
once pale ... now knows
.... with the touch of
tender

"Trace my body with your words
and in doing so, you touch my heart"
Snow

WRBreezin
Member

since 2001-08-04

Posts 212

1 posted 2001-08-11 08:26 AM

Charming, without doubt...each word a bridge of connecting passion.

Willie

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2001-08-12 12:24 PM

Interesting how this poem kind of ties in with your signature. A tender touch, is there any better?

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

3 posted 2001-08-12 01:09 AM

Willie and Duncan thank you both very much for the comments.

I truly appreciate each one ;-)

snow

"Trace my body with your words
and in doing so, you touch my heart"
Snow

redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

4 posted 2001-08-12 04:00 AM

sweetly spoken a love story

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-08-12 04:28 AM

Enjoyed your poem Snow..James

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