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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan 
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ZALIM LOOEG CRUEL PEOPLE Khtay hain baray zalim hain yah zamanay walay It is very common that people of this world are very cruel Hud to chaaen sey jitay hain oor humain murnay bi naheen datay They live with peace themselves and do not let me to die even Kiyah zikar karoon uss ki ruswaeoon ka aab What I tell you her infamies (towards me) Hud too hunstay hain saray mahfil oor humain ronay bi naheen datay They laugh themselves in front of others and do not let me to weep even Nazuki unn ki dakhiyay jo dioon pay raaj karaty hain Look the softness of those who rule on the hearts Kud too phooloon pey chultay hain oor humain kantay bi naheen datay They walk themselves on flowers and do not let me give thorns even Raat bhur unheen ungraeyoon main kut jati hay Waseem The whole night is spent in the yawns Hud too khaboon main khoey hain orr humain soonay bi naheen datay They are in the dreams and do not let me to sleep even ~Wasi I love to nice poetry. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
well, I'm nice to you  hugs SEA |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Well I've met a few of those. But the good ones truly outweigh the bad. I hope you become surrounded by the lovely ones. Sincerely, Regina |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very beautiful verse. All writing comes |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
well done waseem ...They are the selfish ones who do bore you to tears telling about their own dreams .... I loved how you have written this one |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Nazuki unn ki dakhiyay jo dioon pay raaj karaty hain Look the softness of those who rule on the hearts Kud too phooloon pey chultay hain oor humain kantay bi naheen datay They walk themselves on flowers and do not let me give thorns even very nice lines here... and a very nice job with the entire poem. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
This is very cool and I too, hope you meet some kinder people. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Waseem~ You share so beautifully with us ... Thank you~ It would be my wish for you that kindness meet you on every corner~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh Wasi...who has been cruel to you? Don't make me come over there!!!! Hugs my friend, have missed you. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nicely said - and I'm pleased to see your post done bilingually - We're a diverse membership, and it's wonderful to see that incorporated into our poetry... |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
I am really very thankful to you all for such appriciation...I love you Actually I did mot meet to any cruel people it is just an imagination...... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Well then, very good, bilingual imagination, Wasi. [This message has been edited by Duncan (edited 08-23-2001).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Waseem, every time I see you write in your native language and the translation in English. I think that's wonderful. Yes imaginary, but so very true sometimes. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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