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Waseem Cheema
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0 posted 2001-08-11 03:01 PM




ZALIM LOOEG
CRUEL PEOPLE


Khtay hain baray zalim hain yah zamanay walay
It is very common that people of this world are very cruel
Hud to chaaen sey jitay hain oor humain murnay bi naheen datay
They live with peace themselves and do not let me to die even

Kiyah zikar karoon uss ki ruswaeoon ka aab
What I tell you her infamies (towards me)
Hud too hunstay hain saray mahfil oor humain ronay bi naheen datay
They laugh themselves in front of others and do not let me to weep even

Nazuki unn ki dakhiyay jo dioon pay raaj karaty hain
Look the softness of those who rule on the hearts
Kud too phooloon pey chultay hain oor humain kantay bi naheen datay
They walk themselves on flowers and do not let me give thorns even

Raat bhur unheen ungraeyoon main kut jati hay Waseem
The whole night is spent in the yawns
Hud too khaboon main khoey hain orr humain soonay bi naheen datay
They are in the dreams and do not let me to sleep even

~Wasi

I love to nice poetry.

© Copyright 2001 Wasee Ashraf Cheema - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-08-11 03:05 PM


well, I'm nice to you  hugs   SEA

rwood
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2 posted 2001-08-11 07:04 PM


Well I've met a few of those. But the good ones truly outweigh the bad. I hope you become surrounded by the lovely ones.
Sincerely,
Regina

Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2001-08-11 07:30 PM


Very beautiful verse.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

helen smith
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4 posted 2001-08-16 03:37 PM


well done waseem ...They are the selfish  ones   who do bore you to tears  telling about their own dreams ....  I loved   how you have written this one
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5 posted 2001-08-16 03:41 PM


Nazuki unn ki dakhiyay jo dioon pay raaj karaty hain
Look the softness of those who rule on the hearts
Kud too phooloon pey chultay hain oor humain kantay bi naheen datay
They walk themselves on flowers and do not let me give thorns even
very nice lines here... and a very nice job with the entire poem.


Duncan
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6 posted 2001-08-16 11:35 PM


This is very cool and I too, hope you meet some kinder people.
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7 posted 2001-08-17 04:45 AM


Waseem~
You share so beautifully with us ...
Thank you~
It would be my wish for you
that kindness meet you on every corner~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 2001-08-17 04:51 AM


Oh Wasi...who has been cruel to you? Don't make me come over there!!!!   Hugs my friend, have missed you.
Nan
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9 posted 2001-08-17 08:56 AM


Very nicely said - and I'm pleased to see your post done bilingually - We're a diverse membership, and it's wonderful to see that incorporated into our poetry...
Waseem Cheema
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10 posted 2001-08-23 01:09 AM


I am really very thankful to you all for such appriciation...I love you
Actually I did mot meet to any cruel people  
it is just an imagination......

Duncan
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11 posted 2001-08-23 02:13 AM


Well then, very good, bilingual imagination, Wasi.

[This message has been edited by Duncan (edited 08-23-2001).]

Titia Geertman
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12 posted 2001-08-23 05:39 PM


Waseem, every time I see you write in your native language and the translation in English. I think that's wonderful.

Yes imaginary, but so very true sometimes.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

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