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bslicker
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state of mind

0 posted 2001-08-23 04:09 PM



Awake

Just awake
from the night before
the cloaks
of clothing on the floor

I awake
while your laying still
tenderness lingers
my heart you fill

Beauty awake
my eyes do see
one more entry
mind memories


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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1 posted 2001-08-23 04:11 PM


oh Bernie..this has got to be my favorite of yours...just gorgeous. Not much else I can say.  
Elizabeth
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2 posted 2001-08-23 04:11 PM


How nice to wake up to that.
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3 posted 2001-08-23 04:42 PM


Oooh! *sigh* Love it.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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4 posted 2001-08-23 05:40 PM


mind memories. very nice line, wraps it up beautifully.
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