Open Poetry #15 |
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I Have To Remind Myself To Breathe---for you love |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ride the wind wild across a storm tossed sea Touch the sky with an echo pulled from the depths of a sigh Dream higher and farther than yesterdays song Breathe Sing the stars softly down out of the sky Shiver at the whispers of your love Cradled in the shelter of your arms Breathe Dance to the rhythm of the rain as it falls Shattered by the thunder in your kiss Driven by the current in your eyes Breathe Tempt me to torment on kiss swollen lips Tease me with desire filled eyes Love me til dawn lightens the sky Breathe Breathe Just breathe |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Tempt me to torment on kiss swollen lips Tease me with desire filled eyes Love me til dawn lightens the sky Breathe Remembering this feeling...wishing you the best that love can be. There's nothing more striking than a poet in love. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Ride the wind wild across a storm tossed sea Touch the sky with an echo pulled from the depths of a sigh Dream higher and farther than yesterdays song Breathe Sing the stars softly down out of the sky Shiver at the whispers of your love Cradled in the shelter of your arms Breathe Dance to the rhythm of the rain as it falls Shattered by the thunder in your kiss Driven by the current in your eyes Breathe ============================== I must agree with Duncan.... this level of inspire is striking...... one of your finest Paula...this is lovely If you can write like this holding your breath...imagine what you'll be capable of when you exhale ![]() very very well done poetess P. jm Well I looked to the sky for my anthem |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ This is so lovely~ You wear love well~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Dance to the rhythm of the rain as it falls Shattered by the thunder in your kiss Driven by the current in your eyes Breathe" WOW Paula........ ![]() ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Kiss swollen lips huh...how wonderful...James |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
breathe in the love. . . and breathe out the happiness. . . ![]() wonderful my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful poem. Happy that it got published. And ... those "kiss swollen lips" sent me right back into some sweetly cherished memories! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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