Open Poetry #15 |
Liquid Summer |
rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Dog days, trickling in The red hot tomatoes, turn saucy on the vine Fried peanut butter and banana sandwiches Laying out in the sun, wrinkling up to swell The puffy feet of noon. They flip the butter Scorching gold and drip off the sides The only thing humming is the cicadas droning water in the trees, crazy screams Of tree bark, wishing they could whisper a little softer, than a loud roar The sound of madness, escaped lunatics Leaving their straight jackets home The Wisteria drilling deeper roots to hit water down below the dredges Of what's left beyond the limestone Squeezing my porch posts into knots As it digs in. Quinching Tar heat rising, in roads of curve Slinging hot, the snakes belly up Making for the other side of Hades Rolling like Flipper, not to fry In the middle of the road frenzy I live for the clink and clank Of ice. Dreaming delirious lemon sugar Days. Pulpy fiction floating topaz By the gallon, I drink, rocking slowly As to not stir up the dust into my Liquid Summer, melting, into soon, the Fall |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Regina, a great read, could feel my bare feet on the scorching tar and followed the root system as it searched. Here the tempurature is about 13 deg c, overcast and threatening rain. Hope you enjoy the shade, the refreshments and the thought of your fall to come. Rick |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Peanut butter and banana sandwiches, yes, but fried? And the snakes twisting in the roads. The South in August, no better time. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh. . . glass of iced tea?? I love this Regina. . . it's a perfect description of Summer, and the flow of your words is wonderful. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Beautifully descriptive write, Regina Easy to relate after a couple weeks of blistering heat up here as well. Well done Rex |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nicely visual, one can feel the heat in the air, the sounds, the tastes. You do all types of poems well. Sandra |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
excellent descriptive imagery and visuals you took us there sights, sounds, smells and sweat very well done poetess RW very cool title (no pun intended) I know no one is to blame |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Incredibly descriptive Regina! This is fabulous ... you've captured the mood perfectly, much enjoyed this wonderful piece! Best wishes, /Kit |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Cheers to you all! I wish you all cool summer breezes and may passion thunder rain in the night sky! Thanks so much for reading and boosting my spirit here in these pages. Sincerely, Regina |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
Regina, even though I am in the middle of winter here, I could still feel the heat from your words. Very descriptive, I enjoyed. Maeve Take me home to Erin's shores, |
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