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Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

0 posted 2001-08-09 06:49 PM

The dreams I never dreamt
The fates I chose not to tempt
Within your eyes they materialize
Upon my heart they crystallize

To this love I’ve nothing to compare
An answer to an unsung prayer
Your softened touch fills the emptiness
To the needs I never dared confess

The song that held no lyrics
Now has a melody to affix
Upon our souls they have a place
Landing there with gentle grace

Within this world spinning round
My feet have yet to touch the ground
For within your love I’m mystified
My soul completely gratified

This devotion......made from two
The happiness I have with you
Like nothing ever dreamt before
A love to last forevermore

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

1 posted 2001-08-09 07:02 PM

Butterflies,

"The song that held no lyrics
Now has a melody to affix
Upon our souls they have a place
Landing there with gentle grace..."

Awwwww I like this

And I like this stanza the best

I'm glad I stopped in.

TaraB

Constance
Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 393
Ohio

2 posted 2001-08-09 07:02 PM

Absolutely lovely! you have captured here both the strength and fragility of love.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-08-09 07:06 PM

So good to see you again!

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kay

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-08-09 07:06 PM

To this love I’ve nothing to compare
An answer to an unsung prayer
Your softened touch fills the emptiness
To the needs I never dared confess
===================================
Within this world spinning round
My feet have yet to touch the ground
For within your love I’m mystified
My soul completely gratified

This devotion......made from two
The happiness I have with you
Like nothing ever dreamt before
A love to last forevermore
==================================

Well lookie there...a GOLDEN butterfly

this is beautiful baby!!!
youre so lovely in love...

you wear it well me girlie ...
its your time to LIVE those dreams, your time to fly
with those golden breezes beneath your wings..your bound to be soaring *S*
and may I add its been WAY too long since we saw your name here...
BUT obvioulsy youve been spending your time well

love you girlie

me

I know no one is to blame
In time youll feel strength when you call my name
I know Ill never hold you again
And I know Ill never be the same
VH

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-08-09 07:12 PM

Holly, this is so beautiful!

When I saw your name, I knew I was in for a treat. I'm so happy for you!~

This one's a keeper

Melissa~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-08-09 07:15 PM

MzButterFliesDon'tCry~
It's a treat to see you home ! !
Lovely heartfelt write~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2001-08-09 07:37 PM

Holly-
   So good to see you here, my friend.
   I've missed reading your lovely poetry.
   This one is absolutely beautiful!

        "Within this world spinning round
        My feet have yet to touch the ground
        For within your love I’m mystified
        My soul completely gratified

        This devotion......made from two
        The happiness I have with you
        Like nothing ever dreamt before
        A love to last forevermore"

   Such lovely words you've penned.
   Welcome back, butterfly friend.
   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

8 posted 2001-08-09 08:07 PM

Holly, it is a true delight to see you share one of your works with us and maybe I have been gone awhile but I do know it has been far too long. You wear the heart of love well and when you pen it then of course we all get to experience the beauty of a true butterfly at her finest hour. A lovely and sweet write indeed my dear friend.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2001-08-09 08:13 PM

Butterflies--So good to see you and read this lovely love song!

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

10 posted 2001-08-09 08:17 PM

Butterflies, a wonderful wonderful poem. So glad to read you again....

So your taken then eh! damn..

Parker

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

11 posted 2001-08-09 08:22 PM

Simply beautiful and written as it sould be forevermore.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

12 posted 2001-08-09 09:12 PM

'The dreams I never dreamt
The fates I chose not to tempt
Within your eyes they materialize
Upon my heart they crystallize

To this love I’ve nothing to compare
An answer to an unsung prayer
Your softened touch fills the emptiness
To the needs I never dared confess'

Yes, it is wonderful to read a poem from you, butterflies...this is absolutely beautiful...I love it! the illustration of love and devotion is just fantastic!

sp

no power in creation,
no mortal complication,
will ever stop me from being with you...

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

13 posted 2001-08-10 09:37 AM

This one sails right up there my friend! And yes, that golden glow fits you well, take care!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

14 posted 2001-08-10 10:01 AM

Love described in the essence of life and very well done I must say!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

15 posted 2001-08-10 01:12 PM

hey. . . you know that I've always liked this kind of work from you. . . well done. . . flowing and wonderful. . .

nice to see you back for a moment. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

16 posted 2001-08-10 03:05 PM

lovely...James

maeve
Member

since 2001-08-01

Posts 139
In the Outback

17 posted 2001-08-10 07:10 PM

Butterflies, after reading your duet with Eagle I had to see what you do on your own. Its just as beautiful

Maeve

Take me home to Erin's shores,
to where my heart roams free.

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

18 posted 2001-08-10 10:46 PM

Lovely, my Butterfly kid, so very glad to see happiness in your words. Hang on, my kid, enjoy all these good days! You are due for some bright sunshine! Happiness becomes you. Mom Earth

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

19 posted 2001-08-11 03:09 AM

Oh I missed you little butterfly! This was lovely and such a caring poem with sweet softness. Glad you are back.

To see real beauty ~ being blindfolded helps! ~* Mysteria *~

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