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Open Poetry #15

Billowy

WRBreezin
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since 2001-08-04

Posts 212

0 posted 2001-08-09 09:02 AM

Billowy

What voice sweet billowy mime
a noon day falsetto of signs not sound
strain my ears to hear and open my eyes
to the gentle interpretation of the soul
gathering love to prize

Willie
©2001

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-08-09 09:10 AM

WRBreezin,
Sounds good to me. Enjoyed

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

2 posted 2001-08-09 09:22 AM

Very good!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-08-09 11:04 AM

WRBreezin~
Welcome to Passions !
Muchly enjoyed this.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-08-09 11:01 PM

Agree with the others, I like the simplicity combined with beautiful flow.
Sandra

WRBreezin
Member

since 2001-08-04

Posts 212

5 posted 2001-08-11 07:55 AM

Thanks, to one and all, I'm glad this caught your eyes!

Willie

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