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Your Words are the Music
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Your Words are the Music |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Your Words are the Music Your words are the songs that would capture a mind The blossoming roses that ramble and twine That thrive in the lyrics, but wither to death From thoughts yet to pass through your whispering breath Exquisite the phrases from mystical thought Into nets of contentment the music is caught But harbored behind secret curtains by choice Both are forsaken, the ear and the voice The music within you is waiting to soar And be swept up and savored like never before By minds that are waiting to hear what you think Into memories sweet hymnals your melodies sink Your dreams are the words of a beautiful song The world is much richer when you sing along Delve deep into thoughts that come creeping at night And lay them in verses on paper of white Ellizabeth Santos 8/6/01 |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Yes, Ma'am. |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
very well-said Elizabeth. very well indeed! |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
I don't know who this was to but it was fantastic. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Wow, that was excellent and very inspiring, thank you for sharing it. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh,Lizzie~ That's lovely ! You sing so pretty~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
THis one was for you, poet friends Thank you for your comments Liz |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Good music demands an encore... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Liz...James |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
That was T-rific and I will get right on it! To see real beauty ~ being blindfolded helps! ~* Mysteria *~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'll sing if you promise to sing along, m'friend...  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed it does. . . wonderful my friend. . . and thank you. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Elizabeth- This is beautiful. What a lovely song you sing. Hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Liz: Your words truly are like music! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Love the cadence - my like in poetry! Excellent. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I missed reading your work for two weeks, lots of catching up to do, but this was a wonderful start, this was fatastic. *~If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ |
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