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Open Poetry #15

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Topheth
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since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

0 posted 2001-09-11 12:38 PM

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I was hiding in the shade when the world was made,
and watched the Man at work, spitting in the dirt,
making images of clay on that uneventful day.
And when His week was done, turning to go home,
I heard Him speak to warn the figures He had formed:
"Kids, beware the Asp, and stay from out his grasp."

So I wrap my tricks to treat, like an apple good to eat,
because I am no fool - it's easier to push than pull.

[This message has been edited by Topheth (edited 09-11-2001).]

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2001-09-11 12:49 PM

Your poetry is quite a unique addition to this forum. Enjoyed this and in case I forgot before...welcome!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-09-11 01:13 AM

So I wrap my tricks to treat, like an apple good to eat,
because I am no fool - it's easier to push than pull.
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very clever, cryptic write here...
enjoyed the inner rhyme.
well done poet Topheth
(cool name)

Well I looked to the sky for my anthem
The words and the music came through
But words and music can never touch
The beauty that I've seen in you

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-09-11 01:23 AM

very well done

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