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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
inbetweening  on slipped plane the one between the here of now in cosmic sheen where colors none but brightly shown and love is one my soul is drawn ‘tis not glass nor mirror nor crystalline but plain as clear forever’s seen behind eye’s lid images cavort held in the long, love, albeit short is this the time plain ‘pon plane where mystery now goes again and colors have rose again and blend becomes our when again so in this my here of now beg my arms in your somehow know of need in dark of night on slipped plane to be ours, again [This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 08-10-2001).] |
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citizenx Member
since 2001-07-31
Posts 189motorcade |
The word beautiful is so overused but what other word can I use to describe this piece For it is beautiful ‘tis not glass nor mirror nor crystalline but plain as clear forever’s seen behind eye’s lid images cavort held in the long, love, albeit short shadows flicker sweet end tame |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh to be able to live on the plane where love lives. This is a beauty. Much enjoyed. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ Soft cascade of thoughts~ You do this nicely, you know ?  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
‘tis not glass nor mirror nor crystalline but plain as clear forever’s seen behind eye’s lid images cavort held in the long, love, albeit short is this the time plain ‘pon plane where mystery now goes again and colors have rose again and blend becomes our when again so in this my here of now beg my arms in your somehow know of need in dark of night on slipped plane to be ours, again ================================= Lady...once again I wish take one of yours for my own... this is exquisite and delicate and pure poetry... and it wraps around an empty place in me and fills me with an emerald glow. thank you for that dear poetess jmI know no one is to blame |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, yes, those slipped planes, the ones between where anything is possible..you did a very nice provocative write here, very well done..very gentle smile |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady--the place between then and now where love is drawn in crystal dew and time is crinkled with color melding you have lit this place perfect hew. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Lady~ I love it when you write like this, which is often!!  So pretty |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well Lady, he he, I am so glad you have your "Crayola" box out tonight, and I am not even going to try to tell you how much I like the picture you drew. To see real beauty ~ being blindfolded helps! ~* Mysteria *~ |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Lady in White, your presentation and passion is soul engaging. Greatly enjoyed! Willie |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...and again and again... and it can be.. |
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