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A Wish of Gardenia
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A Wish of Gardenia |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Sweet gardenias linger upon the night flowing a waterfall of temptation Oh! How she wishes, she will wake in the morn and bathe within the petals of passion Drowning in bouquet of love bittersweet white velvet tickling between toes, discreet Oh! To awake with gardenias in her hair maybe someone mysterious will place it there opened French Door invites cool night air moonlight reflects upon jeweled lavalliere a candle dripping eternity of tears kiss of a wish soft upon her cheek scent of gardenia lingers upon the night woven in her hair, gardenias' creamy white Chantilly Whispers http://www.angelfire.com/poetry/syberrosetx/ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. Pablo Picasso [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 07-13-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very romantic and tender longing... could almost smell the flowers... nicely done I enjoyed |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lovely fantasy of dreams! gardenias, perfect |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Delicate. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
The next time I open my french doors and walk out on the deck I'm going to think of this one, Victoria! Thank you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ This is just so lovely ... Gardenia is my favorite flower and you've left the scent of it all over this beautiful piece. Also visited your web site ... You've got some lovely stuff happening there ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
The scent of gardenias is one of my favorites. Always reminds me of my Mom. Not that this poem did..  Love this. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you so much Pat..glad you enjoyed VAS..thank you Virginia..nice to hear from you as always RMW..Thank you so much..glad you stopped by. Kathleen..Good im glad ha..thanks for peeking Marge..Thanks Marge..i just made that site the other day..its my third one..tired of the others haa..hugs..i love gardenia too.. Sandra..I use to have a big gardenia bush outside my bedroom window in Hawaii..it smelled so good..i loved it..hugs thanks for peeking in ~Victoria~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful imagery, Victoria! All writing comes |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you lone wolf...appreciate your nice comment.. ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just a beautiful piece of writing, and late posting so with agree with all and say how nicely this flowed and I too am a gardenia lover, and even wear that scent! Thank you for this. ~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Mysteria...nice to hear from you today..hugss...glad you had a chance to peek in.. ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Gorgeous Poetic aroma, Victoria. *s* What a wonderful way to start ANY day, by breathing in that bouquet. Almost impossible to stay sour when something that stunning in nature captures us, isnt' it? much in the way this poem captured me....sigh.....SR |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you shadow rider..for weaving the gardenia in my hair*wink* ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. Pablo Picasso [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 07-14-2001).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Victoria- This is lovely, and so softly written. It just whispers... Beautifully done. Hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Flowers in her hair...love was in the air...James |
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citizenx Member
since 2001-07-31
Posts 189motorcade |
scent of gardenia lingers upon the night woven in her hair, gardenias' creamy white beautiful "the blizzard of the world has crossed the threshold and it has overturned |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
As always Victoria, beautifully done.... hope all is well, Annie May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You can smell the beauty of this warm open inviting poem! Excellent! |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Being from the south and growing up with the smell of gardenias your poem woke up memories in a sweet way. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
my wife's fave flower and a fave poem of yours it is to me |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you so much everyone..so glad you enjoyed...nice to hear from you all..hugss.. ~Victoria~ |
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