Open Poetry #15 |
The Kiss |
Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
The Kiss Kiss me in the morning As the sun kisses the day Kiss me with a smile That takes my blues away Kiss me with love Like the clouds kiss the sky above Kiss me with the fire Fueled by our love Kiss me with your fingertips As sweet words escape your lips Come hold me close Let our bodies kiss Let them mold and blend as one Let our hearts kiss Out of true love Let our souls kiss Out of eternal love Icyheart/alan 08/20/01 |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
simply beautiful |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Alan, well did you get the kiss you wanted I really enjoyed the love you show in this. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful and sooo romantic! kiss, kiss, kiss!! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I don't think you can call yourself "Icyheart" when you write words such as this. Sent tingles up my spine. Lovely writing Tracey If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thanks ladies...glad you all liked it. Tracey..as far as "icyheart" it is what I go under at all the other boards I post at. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
warm heart would be more like it. What a gem of a poem here, I hope you get lots of these kinds of kisses. Sandra |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Alan~ this is soooooooooooo nice very warm thoughts here "Deputy Moderator ~ Open Forum" |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
catalinamoon..I will stick with icyheart..i am glad you like the poem...as for the kisses..i never get enough of them.. SEA..thanks for the sweet comment... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I llke the way you composed this kiss Alan...James |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
what is this "icyheart" stuff....! romance such as this, doesnt come from icyhearts! you must, YOU MUST change your name on all those other boards..! lol this is wonderful alan..nothin like a kiss... hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
James.thanks sir, dgvarner....thanks you..there is something better than a kiss...a bunch of them.. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh the romance just blooms around that full moon!! Absolutely great romantic stuff! |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thanks ethome... |
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