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wpwpoet Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 99 |
Paradise She: Sweetest, spring waters, warm from ethereal depths: flows forth rushing currents. As, empassioned valleys cascade, her flourishing essence: which we explore, upon these our ships moutainous, embrace. Wings, whom in her name kiss virgin terrain, as yet unknown Her: Paradise, opens majestically to unfolding euphoria; oceans: where waves of aphrodisia support our vessel, sailing her tidal emotion, free: exposed to the lucid sea. That which fills, our coupled souls. co.082699wpwpoet [This message has been edited by wpwpoet (edited 08-07-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Poet, I don't know if the spacing was intentional, but it did have a way of setting off the thoughts behind this...I enjoyed...thank you! |
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wpwpoet Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 99 |
lady- yes it is intentional. unfortunatly it is still not right for me. but then I seem to never be satisfied. thank you for reading and commenting... peace...wpwpoet |
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