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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Grieve I grieve For all I've lost For all the special parts of me Life has thrown against the rocks Connie McDonald Copyright@2001 |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
powerful!! Causes one to wonder what has caused such pain and to hope it's much better now and even more soon |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
The sense of loss is brutally audible...well done. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sorrow spoken in succinct perfect poetic impact. a bittersweet beauty. well done poetess, nice to see your name here again. jm slow burn ... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes but you know something? There's beautiful white foam splashing those rocks and in that, maybe a cleansing...of sorts. Enjoyed this but so sad ... " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
VAS, JLR JanetMarie Irish Rose Quite Humbling to see the emotions brought forth by my words Thank You All Thank You |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Not "lost", Connie -- just transformed... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well said...we all have our times of grief...James |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
I do, too - so this poem really touches me. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Thanks You All Very Much.... |
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