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Open Poetry #15

With You In My Thoughts

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-08-06 09:05 PM

I could try to pen a love song
But no words would ever do
To tell you how much your love
Has made me feel like new

You've opened up my eyes
And soothed my aching heart
How often my thoughts turn to you
During the times we are apart

So much love I have for you
Though you're so many miles away
So many treasured memories I have
Inside my heart you'll always stay

I'll light a candle to our love
And keep love's fire burning bright
Thoughts of you will come to me
From the moment I turn out the light

Suetang

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2001-08-06 09:39 PM

Sounds like love to me!

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

2 posted 2001-08-06 10:35 PM

You got this love poem thing down
to a great system!
I am glad you got something so great!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

3 posted 2001-08-06 11:14 PM

Suetang, woohoo so very beautiful! Truly is, My Friend.

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

xerxes
Junior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 34

4 posted 2001-08-06 11:48 PM

So lovely, the line are so well written, the emotion is so vivid. You are excellent. I enjoyed it sincerely.
-XERXES

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2001-08-07 06:10 PM

enjoy

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

6 posted 2001-08-10 05:19 PM

What a lucky "other"... hope they're appreciative.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

7 posted 2001-08-10 09:54 PM

And isn't that what it is suppose to be all about? Ahh, very nice write, Sue, very gentle smile

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

8 posted 2001-08-10 10:27 PM

Thank you all so very much and, yes, I'm a self confessed hopeless romantic.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

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