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The Wish
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The Wish |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Wish Filled by the magic of desire Found in the depth of some old prime. Thrown by a comets dazzling fire Released from its prison in time. A wish, was never meant to be Long gone on the outgoing tide A swan of past age for me A crave, hidden in strict confide. A hope that sunned a hermits green A hidden shun obscured away A wish was never to be seen A want that almost passed its day Happened in a glories moment In a whim of an instants thaw In a moment of heavens vent Given me with ecstasies awe. Again, a gift was never to be But some how, some way, sent to me. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, You are fortunate to have a wish come true. It is a rare thing and your poetry is of rare beauty Liz |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Yes, this is very well done. I enjoyed it. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Filled by the magic of desire Found in the depth of some old prime. Thrown by a comets dazzling fire Released from its prison in time. A wish, was never meant to be Long gone on the outgoing tide A swan of past age for me ============================ A hope that sunned a hermits green ============================ Happened in a glories moment In a whim of an instants thaw In a moment of heavens vent Given me with ecstasies awe. Again, a gift was never to be But some how, some way, sent to me. ================================== You're never, ever, to old to dream tis never too late for dreams and wishes to come true... You need only to reach for your shining star.. you need only believe in you Then you'd see the beauty of you that I do  *winkiewinkie*  mewont you sing me your poetry |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
You have expressed well that instant moment of a gift's delight... and gave it to us, in gold and gilt foil, bright... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Your replies are always a delight. Sy Mirror Man, Thank you for the well done. JM, I do believe in YOU my Tinkerbell, winkiewinkie Stinky. Decaflame, Wonderful comment, thank you. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
these are the gifts that are our life. . . great job Sy. . .  -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Thank you my friend. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You have a gift! As you so wonderfully express receiving one. Excellent. Sincerely, Regina What lies behind us and what lies before us |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--The best gifts are given "in a glories moment". |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You're some kinda wonderful~ Ya' know ? *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Filled by the magic of desire Found in the depth of some old prime. Thrown by a comets dazzling fire Released from its prison in time." Now this is me! I'm filled with that desire, I'm in my prime and I'm released from a prison in my writing. How wonderful to read this today." I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Regina, Thank you for the boost and excellent. Martie, True, *L* Marge, And you are some kind of love. Hugs and kisses. Irish, Wonderful comment, thank you. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Seymour- This is just lovely. What a treasure of penning.. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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