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Open Poetry #15

Making My Way To You

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-08-04 06:24 PM

I'll sail the highest seas
and climb the highest mountain peak
as I count the steps to the door of your heart
Then I'll offer you my heart
as the place for your new address

No mountain too high
no ocean too deep
no river too wide
no sea too rough

Whatever it takes to be by your side
My love for you I can no longer hide
So take my hand and come with me
We'll ride on moonbeams
And drown in love's sea

Within each others arms
We'll keep ourselves warm
For a love as great as ours
Shall weather any storm

So far away you seem to be
But when I close my eyes
You're here with me
To feel your touch on my skin
Would make me feel so alive
You're love is the only thing
That I need to survive

In your arms is where I'd like to belong
Needing your guidance to keep me strong
As you shelter me from the cold
I think I've found my very own pot of gold

Suetang

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2001-08-04 06:58 PM

What a sweet verse of devotion and love!

Well done!

Melissa~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-08-04 08:34 PM

SueTang~
Such strong devotion and dedication~
Nicely done.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

3 posted 2001-08-04 11:36 PM

Wow Sue...Really glorious devotion. I hope they know how lucky they are! Simply divine.
Sincerely,
Regina

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

4 posted 2001-08-06 08:51 PM

I've felt that way before... nothing else matters in that frame of mind, and one truly feels "complete". You've caught some of that essence here, Sue... keep that Love alive!

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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