Open Poetry #15 |
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Twenty or Less...#26 |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Suffer delicious Love Pretend there's Hope Defy tragedy's nightmare Make Passion understand your dreams But Never Be Idle (Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON) "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Yes.. nice message in an interesting form.. I enjoyed Mark... and enjoyed especially the look of the poem on the page coupled with the meaning... Nice work |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thanks, Ron... this one may be one of my favorites, so far... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Agree 100% ![]() Sandra |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
This one is it! Live, Live, Live. It screams, it encourages, it cries, it does it! Nike: "Just Do It". Comes to mind. DO something! Sincerely, Regina |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thanks Sandra. Regina -- pretty much. "Fight the inertia". -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Mark, Truly sage advice, I think I'll take it! Wonderful... Elise |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Definitely words to live by...this is a keeper ![]() ~Krista ![]() "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
hehe...shoot. I forgot to click the "add to library" box! Is there no other way to save someone's poem there? |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thank you, Elise... if it works -- use it! Krista -- it's nice to be kept... Thank you. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
a nice motto to live by...keeping this too... ![]() |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool write Mark... an ambitous creedo I like the passion in this consise piece. your experimentation in succinctity seems to be catching on these boards... ya know what they say... imitation is the greatest form of flattery ![]() well done poet sir jm slow burn ... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thank you, faterider -- a big smile to you! JM: thank you very much... I've never been much of a "follower", but I'll definitely apply what I can learn... This experiment is a lot of fun and helping me to see things from another perspective which is always invaluable. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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