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SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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0 posted 2001-08-04 03:39 PM

Full Moon Fantasy

She walks in crystal moonbeams
where sand meets the sea
feeling her desire build
Lost in rhythmic rhapsody

His vision fills her mind
His touch becomes the midnight air
And with the fluttering of angel’s wing
Her wish has brought him there

As eyes meet and lips collide
Passion is uncontrolled
It is tonight it shall begin
This fantasy’s soft unfold

They fall together breathlessly
Under magic glimmer glow
Time stops to witness love
They create soft and slow

Her eyes flutter open
She smiles wistfully
And in her heart she safely holds
Her full moon fantasy

~SEA~

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

1 posted 2001-08-04 04:01 PM

I like this : )
Very Good...

Thank You
~~~Connie~~~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-08-04 05:29 PM

"And in her heart she safely holds her full moon fantasy." Nice one Sea...James

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-08-04 05:44 PM

this is so tender and lyrical...really enjoyed...you are really doing some wonderfully romantic pieces of late, enjoy them so much

you surely must be enjoying their 'inspiration' too

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-08-04 05:45 PM

SEA~
I just loved the magnetic rhyme
that pulled me into this fantasy !
Moonlight becomes you ....

Beautifully done, gal~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2001-08-04 05:55 PM

Aw, SEA, what a perfect touch you use with this poem! I have all kinds of cracks and responses for this one but it's too touching to be belittled so just accept my well done

(but watch out next time!

)

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-08-04 06:11 PM

Connie~ thank you

James~ glad you liked

VAS~ lyrical, I like that, thank you!

Marge~ you clever lady!

thank you so much

hugs right back to ya

Balladeer~ you got something sassy to say to me?! give it up mister.....

you know I like sassy

well done is nice, thank you...but really, I'll take the wise cracks....

~SEA

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2001-08-04 06:44 PM

Gosh, this is so sensually beautiful - it's perfect! I love it. Your writing just gets better and better

Melissa~

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-08-04 07:54 PM

I'll have to agree with Melissa on that last comment. . . this is wonderful. . .

you know that I like it. . .

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SEA

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with you

9 posted 2001-08-04 07:58 PM

thank you Melissa, that is so sweet of you

Sven, that is very kind of you

thank you

~SEA

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

10 posted 2001-08-04 08:37 PM

She walks in crystal moonbeams
where sand meets the sea
feeling her desire build
Lost in rhythmic rhapsody

His vision fills her mind
His touch becomes the midnight air
And with the fluttering of angel’s wing
Her wish has brought him there
========================

They fall together breathlessly
Under magic glimmer glow
Time stops to witness love
They create soft and slow

Her eyes flutter open
She smiles wistfully
And in her heart she safely holds
Her full moon fantasy
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Sea, this is absolutely perfect poetry...
what a very very cool poem..what a beautiful, passionate, poem.
The imagery..the poetic phrasing, the cadence..the expression of the emotions..
every word...poetry in motion...
I leave this post with a bad case of poetic envy...for both the inspire and the desire.
(IWIHWT)(IWIHSLTTIMTW)
One of your best Susan.
jm

slow burn ...
light a candle for our love
So that we will always be
one on one in lovely love

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

11 posted 2001-08-04 08:48 PM

Sensual, romantic I love it! Great work.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

12 posted 2001-08-06 11:38 AM

forgot to put in my library

wont you sing me your poetry
wont you take me to your home
wont you be for me forever
so Ill never be alone
youre my dream, its a beautiful thing

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

13 posted 2001-08-06 11:49 AM

moonlight fantasy
that is what I wish to be
one would dream of me
and fly to my arms aglee
as we kiss by crashing sea

http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/interloper.htm

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

14 posted 2001-08-29 03:46 AM

SEA-
   This truly is beautiful.
   It reads like a song.
   Very nicely done.

   Hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

15 posted 2001-08-29 07:51 AM

awww Sea what a fabulous love song....Love it a lot

Charisma

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

16 posted 2001-08-29 11:26 AM

Yep I took think this is just absolutley romantic.

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

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