Open Poetry #15 |
Love Potion-The beginning |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Amor, she says, is all she needs but scarcely can she find the source till walking through the park one day she strays a little bit off course. An aged man of wisdom waits a scroll of parchment in his grasp as she goes by he offers her says what you crave is found at last. Within this scroll the potent spell the formula for love of souls approach with care, admonished he for herein lies much more than gold. From gentle eyes fall salty tears as she thanks him with voice of awe and hurries home to start her task with faithfulness in what she saw. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 07-13-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
sounds like the beginning of quite a tale....and well told at that... I enjoyed!! |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, Oh, if only...... Beautiful! Love, Elise |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
fascinating, agree with Cpat! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Beguiling... intriguing... provoking... different... -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
A vision with lasting effects I am sure left me here waiting with anticipation... ...(wink) watch out for those little old men hidden in the park. -Bob |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hope this is not Love Potion # 9...very dangerous....James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I will have to whip a love potion up one of these days or nights...and freeze it just in case haa.... ~Victoria~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ahh...and so it begins...the magic is passed on, and the answers sought all lie within the scroll. Am looking forward to Part II, very much!! Love this!! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
let the tale begin. . . I know that you will tell it in your own wonderful style. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
How very soul inspiring beginning, love the way this is heading..well done, Sandra..very gentle smile |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, mmmmmmm...sounds like the beginning of a beautiful romance! (smiles) May you find the most beautiful love soon and share eternal happiness with him always! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shin eupon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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