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Orchestrated Love |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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The music we created so many years ago began with an introduction soft spoken, shy "hello" You've been the ever steady tempo I've needed all my life I am the hot passionate rhythm that you wanted in a wife Seventeen years of friendship created sweet harmony a perfect blend of sound ~ this song of you and me It only took a moment for us to hear the melody that would grow for a lifetime into our symphony ~SEA~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Together you have both created a beautiful harmony within this poem. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
great symphony of love we find in your words. love it Charisma |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
quite a composition... one I enjoyed hearing.. nice work... and may you always hear the strains of this duet in harmony. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You go girl! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - very special writing for a loved one. Nicely done, and I liked it very much. BC |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
And the orchestra plays on ...  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
absolutely beautiful and superb!!!!That's what loving relationships are made of, even if I'm grammatically incorrect by ending with a preposition...oh I didn't cuz I added all this other stuff, heh heh heh |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
To grow together is what it's all about... Very nice, SEA...  |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Let the music play forever... Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Susan ... this is just beautiful. It flows as sweetly as a melody itself, very lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA, this is so good, so YOU...and such a testament of a good, loving and working marriage! I am so happy for you and your husband...I would say you were lucky, but it takes more than luck to make it last! Well done! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I can't thank you all enough this is the poem I'm going to give my husband for our 4th anniversary on the 19th of this month.....I was hoping it would be good enough to put in a card.....so thank you for the encouragement. |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Yes SEA .......It is really able to give him as a present...Its lovely. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you Wasi |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh Sea he will love this...lucky man to have you girl |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Very touching. Good to see a success story. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Its MUCH MORE than just good enough... its perfect...its sincerety makes it so... and its clever as well...working in all the elements of music to express the devotion. way cool Sea-girlie... Happy Anniversary (early)  Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Wow.......I loved it sooooooooo much The meldoy you play here is really wonderful.....soft and touching. Surely he'd love it too...... Happy Anniversary in advance....... thank you for sharing ..... ******************************* It's only me.......only me |
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pooh Junior Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 12iowa usa |
very touching!!!!! I hope your husband enjoys it as much as i did!!!! Love the words. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Gorgeous!!! Loved every word. (((hugs)))Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
May it be an endless melody for you two and your family! -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it! (kiss on cheek) A symphony of love shines in your words, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! May the music of joy forever sing in your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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