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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-07-13 10:19 PM

She gathered bits of roots and seeds
and mixed the formula with hope
a dash of water, and twas done
uncertainty was out of scope.

Looking askance she drank it down
and spoke the words to call unto
her lover who would soon arrive
and prove the wizard to be true.

She waited patiently all day
and rather far into the night
she held her head up high and knew
that soon he'd be within her sight.

The new day dawned, she was alone
yet something in her heart had changed
she felt a warmth grow ever bright
as former life was rearranged.

For potions work in many ways
and this one did as it was meant
to give her hope, renew her dreams
the reason the old man was sent..

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-07-13 10:24 PM

Oh, I like this very much!! Great work, Sandra.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-07-13 10:50 PM

Yes, very good indeed, and so nice to SEE you!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-07-14 03:12 AM

Yes very important to have hopes and dreams...sometimes its hard to let go of the old ones that don't work out as we wish and make the transition to the new ones....James

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

4 posted 2001-07-14 09:06 AM

and Part II is as enticingly beautiful and mystical as Part I!!!!! Sandra, you are the real magic!!!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2001-07-14 09:56 AM

renewed hope...a wondrous potion indeed

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-07-14 11:08 AM

just what I've always said. . . you have to love yourself first. . .

beautifully done Sandra. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

7 posted 2001-07-14 11:14 AM

A refreshing twist of fate. I like the original approach here. Luckily, the old man had good motives!

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear; few can listen."

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

8 posted 2001-07-14 11:24 AM

Ahhh, how great. Very well done, for the hope shows through, and with hope, all is possible..very gentle smile

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-01-19 05:27 PM

(sigh) Ooohhhhhh...soooo beautiful, sweet friend, such a beautiful uplifting hope of finding true love shines in your words! (kiss on cheek) Always believe in your dreams and they will come true, I know they will and love will come to your heart! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shin eupon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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