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Five Senses |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Five Senses There are five doors into my soul And each would fare a separate toll The first would look with daring dare Upon the beauty that is there T’would open up a door to see The inner garden lives in me. The second would offer a rhyme To float about my head in chime To lay a song upon my brain To enter in this door and reign And third would be the feel of bliss This sent to me upon a kiss And this would open door of three Again to reach inside of me And four would taste desires wild By spreading honey over mild Opening up another door The one that shows forever more. And lastly would your smell set plumb To close the doors and make me dumb From what is left the world that ‘tis For this is where my Eden is. And then the doors would close to stay A journey’s ever and a day. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ah yes - Very sensuous indeed, Sweet Sy...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Good morning, Sweet Nan and may you have the best of days. *L* Sy |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Yep.. that cover them.. and you did it quite well...as usual |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*Sys* Ohh..   Sorry.. I meant *SIGHS* Need I say anymore?  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Each stanza, a bonanza but set to speak, yea, brings Eureka... Smiling.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I would gladly pay whatever the toll ... to journey into your poetic soul to walk barefoot in the Eden of your mind ... knowing the beauty I will find a garden where wisdom grows ... where butterflies flutter beneath rainbows a journey into the evermore ... where Tinkerbells & Randy dragons can freely soar this place where rhyme is the only toll ... to travel to the goal of your soul I'll need no map for this journey to start ... I'll take the shortcut thru your heart *winkiewinkie*  jm   Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair, Thank you for the nice response. Temptress, You need say no more. *L* Sunshine, Beautiful comment. *L* JM, And I would have you fly with me Beyond the now beyond the sea. The paradise you picture here This shangri-la of endear. Love Ya Sy |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Great job, Sy, fabulous. This seems like a great exercise for one to get to know themselves and place it in verse. What dya think? |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A unique approach well presented. Enjoyed this picturesque pondering. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ When it comes to 'senses' ... I often feel I've lost all mine !  But then, I 'come to' ... and there they are~ This is another of your blessings in rhyme ... and JanetMarie's~ response is precious ! You are soooooooo good ! Thank you for treating us to your poetry~ Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS, I think so. *L* Mark, A good literal answer. Marge, Love you too and JM's answers are always precious. Thank you for your ever thought full reply's. *L* |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
seymour, i dig the concept, enjoyed reading it. i even read it twice! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Faterider, Thank you for the like. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I missed this one. So glad it got bumped back. For I love the way you use all your senses in this. Opening up all the way into your world of splendor. Superb! Sincerely, Regina |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--Your soul would be a marvelous place to visit...each chamber uniquely you..and that means special! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rwood, Thank you for the beautiful comment. Martie, A wonderful response, thank you |
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