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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-08-13 01:21 AM

HOT

Heat waves "Hi. Hello."
On the ground the eggs will fry
Taste the bits of grass

~~~

101

Inside I smile big
Outside a painting is born
It’s sunburn canvas

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 08-13-2001).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-08-13 01:49 AM

Walt~

This Hot Is So COOL !

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2001-08-13 05:54 AM

You rock Walt

Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

3 posted 2001-08-13 10:02 AM

it is in his style
it greets me with miles of smiles
his Wows wave so warm

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-08-13 10:12 AM

heh heh heh
enjoyed both
especially the sunburn on the canvas
feeling red?

paladin

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since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

5 posted 2001-08-13 11:07 AM

Very good.I'm glad you tried haiku.

paladin

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-08-13 07:16 PM

only the genius of walt could combine acrostic with haiku. . .

and do it so well!!!! great job walty!!!

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Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2001-08-14 01:17 AM

Oh Walty m'friend these are so very good and clever. Especially loved the "101"

Well done!

Maree

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2001-08-14 01:19 AM

Walt-
   You are AWESOME!
   Love it!

   Hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

9 posted 2001-08-14 03:14 AM

Really coooool haikus Walt and ya know what else me likez

Hugs2YuhPoetFriend
*~coco~*

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

10 posted 2001-08-15 12:17 PM

That Texas sun has definetly fried what brain you have LOL....you know I am only kidding...these are fantastic

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

11 posted 2001-08-22 06:21 AM

yo...very cute haiku!

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

12 posted 2001-08-22 08:56 PM

You are great! I loved both! I think you need to open a WayoutWalt World so we could see for ourselves where you come up with this stuff.

LOL

Sincerely,
Regina

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

13 posted 2001-08-22 09:57 PM

you guys and gals have been so nice..sorry i havent been around lately yuh this month is busy for me

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