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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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 Feather The leaf is a treasure if you look with eyes of nymph. The jagged pattern of chewing clue and the feathered quill of white lay delicate as the slightest breeze removes wisps like seeds from a flower. And when they all fly, what will be left? Their fragile dress gone, the truth of this allusive beauty might be a worm, perhaps. It is an albino caterpillar I think, a warp that time threw into nature, without papers and no name except a sigh. [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 08-03-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
and no name except a sigh this I think sums up how I felt about this... very nice... |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I think I resemble that warp.... well done, our Martie.... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
without papers ... that sums me me up to a "T"  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Let's call that thing Silly String ! A caterpillar puff of fluffy stuff just waiting to take wing~ Fascinating photo .... and adorable write. Thankee for sharing both~ *Love n' hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Your poetry is like music, you just have to listen. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The jagged pattern of chewing clue and the feathered quill of white lay delicate as the slightest breeze removes wisps like seeds from a flower. And when they all fly, what will be left? Their fragile dress gone, the truth of this allusive beauty might be a worm, perhaps ===================== the whole world is a treasure when we look at it thru the eyes of a poet named Martie.. very clever and creative write poetess of vision  jmslow burn ... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Martie! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
well done, sweet poetess! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Martie~ A creative and beautiful poem You speak of nature with such fervor!~Melissa~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Martie- Love this adorable little write. Wonderful picture too. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-03-2001).] |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
trust you Martie, to find an amazing creature like this one and then somehow manage to capture it perfectly in verse. I'm impressed as usual. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nature's anomaly indeed - This is grand, Martie...  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Matie, There is nothing that you describe that does not ooze into the very core of aestheteic beauty Liz [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 08-06-2001).] |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
The stillness of the garden. Lovely. |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
I felt I was peekiing over your shoulder and helping name your find with my sighs. This is beautiful and I enjoyed it very much. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Revisiting this beauty. And stopping to admire the way that you see things. Thank you for sharing your words, they're always a treasure Martie. They are. *Peace. |
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