Open Poetry #15 |
Til The Next Sunrise |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Do you ever ask, Why? Why this? Why now? Why us? Is there a reason? Reasons for two hearts To find each other like this Tiny miracles. Through nights rhythm beats A love that was meant to be So why ask why? Why? Give in to the love Let passion set us apart From all the others Your hands, all the touch I need, your lips kissing me Til the next sunrise. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
the reason is apparent..very gentle smile, the fates decreed some happiness, so run with it.. |
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5_sweet_kisses Junior Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 49 |
great poem, im having writters block, just to let everyone know, but i'm still here reading poems |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ The title almost says it all~ Beautifully done, poet. Tiny miracles, indeed ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I had someone ask me this once. I still wonder about it, although I'm not supposed to. I love this, Paula! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
lovely write... I enjoyed a great deal! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well penned....I like the idea til next sunrise and then I'll like it again.....good questions and good poetry.......write on my dear poet lady! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Paula....this touches many places, thank you.... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ahhh, and the next, and the next. and the next. . . |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Paula- These are really beautiful..nicely done. hugs, ~vicky |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Absolutely right on! "Why" is not a word used between lovers or with God. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I enjoy your poetry. It is so full of compassion. Til The Next Sunrise and the next, and the next.... Melton |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Logan...I'm running...straight to him I hope...thanks 5_sweet_kisses...and its nice having you here reading...thank you Marge...thats all we can hope for isnt it...the next sunrise? Thank you sweet lady... Temptress...why arent you supposed to? Thanks sweetie... Cpat Hair...Im glad you enjoyed it...thanks ethome...well you can have the next...and the next...and the next....hugs sweet poet man Decaflame...I'm glad I could touch you...thank you VAS...exactly!!!! vlraynes...thanks Vicky I'm glad you liked them Interloper...no it shouldnt be at all huh? 2dalimit...you are so sweet to say so...thank you |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Beautiful! Simply beautiful! Sauni Sauni :) |
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