Open Poetry #15 |
God Help Us When The Rain Comes Down |
Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
The 23rd will make seven years that my father died. I want to post a poem a day for him until that day. This poem here will be in the news paper for him. GOD HELP US WHEN THE RAIN COMES DOWN Today we will remember you like you are really here And today we will feel the seven missing years This is when our hardest hour is around So, God help us when the rain comes down Just like the wind we dont see but feel You are everything in us that's real So, when we call for you and hear no sound God help us when the rain comes down From every sunrise to the stars at night You were and still are the most beautiful light To know we've lost you it is the darkest cloud So, God help us when the rain comes down On an angels wings to the touch of Jesus hand That was when our loneliest days began In our memories is where our comfort is found So, God help us when the rain comes down Sauni Sauni :) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Saunni~ This is just such a loving gesture from your heart. 'In our memories is where our comfort is found' Cherish those memories, sweetie. Your Dad would no doubt be so proud of you. Bless your heart, honey. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
This makes me think of something that a friend once said to me...Never miss a chance to say "I love you", never be afraid to show it, and treasure every moment you have for you never know what life will bring you. This is beautiful, makes me appreciate a lot of things in my life. Thank you so much for sharing... I love the time |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like the tenderness of your words...James |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Marge, thanks for responding. I hope my dad is watching and can see my love for him still. Breathe, thank you for reading this. I'm glad you got something from it. James, thank you also for taking the time to read this. It means alot. Sauni :) |
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