Open Poetry #15 |
Looking for Elsewhere |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
There’s somewhere, Many places actually come to mind; An elsewhere, That only very few could ever find; Find me a log cabin in Kinkade light, The edge of a forest, edge of a meadow, Bees wax candles flicker into the night, Hearth alive with flames of red and yellow. Let time unwind to the autumnal days, Trees fade from green in many colors seen, Wind rushes in and hurries leaves away Snowflakes drift to take places where they’d been. Some elsewhere One of many places that come to mind. Gloom |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sounds like heaven..helen |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
sounds like a great place... and whether cabin or tent..being out and away..is always a pleasure |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, 1 slick Lady, To be heaven it would need someone to share it with, I’m glad you liked it. Thank you, Cpat Hair, I am glad you are also fond of escaping, It can be the only refuge from the insanity of reality. Gloom |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I love Thomas Kinkade's paintings. I visit a small art gallery in our local mall with nothing but his paintings. It gives me a short escape from reality, and I can dream of being in those settings. Thank you for reminding me it's time to go back and get refreshed. |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Gloom, A beautiful utopia you have created. There are more times than I can count when I'd like to be "elsewhere". Thanks for painting such an imaginative portrait. Elise |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wonderfully written, thoroughly enjoyed. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I think I like this some elsewhere of yours.... |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
I love Kinkade - and your poem makes me feel I've stepped into one of his paintings. This is beautiful. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, PG... Heaven can be somewhere or anywhere if its shared with the right someone.. Yours sounds heavenly.. |
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