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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-08-02 10:55 PM

Eventide

thus the hours speak, as gently
rests sun in decline
on this fraction of
green and blue
only to rise, elsewhere

ne’er tiring, ne’er
shy, but bold in gold
strengthened, it hies

yet again

leaving us in eventide
grip of day liberated
respite allowed in calming
grace, solitude aligning
face of shadows

in chirping song of
evening’s call, touch,
reach for stars to fall,

yet again

then grasp and hold,
to dream upon, a
wish, a hope, a star in
hand, then fling it back
to ne’er land

as in circling,
ever rounding sun, to
eventide, to sun

yet again

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2001-08-02 11:11 PM

Lo, that I return to read a little post a little first thing that greets me eye is the brightness of sunshine tugging me as ever to her words of wonder and light...enjoyed me friend...

jwesley

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

2 posted 2001-08-02 11:55 PM

Very beautiful! So much enjoyed!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2001-08-03 01:35 PM

...and so it turns.. even again.. and again... The sun's always shining somewhere..

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

4 posted 2001-08-03 01:42 PM

"in chirping song of
evening’s call, touch,
reach for stars to fall"

Now those are what I call GREAT lines! I wish I had written them. Such a pretty poem, Karilea. Thanks!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2001-08-06 05:49 PM

Sunshine-
   Oh...I like this lots!

      "in chirping song of
      evening’s call, touch,
      reach for stars to fall,

      yet again

      then grasp and hold,
      to dream upon, a
      wish, a hope, a star in
      hand, then fling it back
      to ne’er land

      as in circling,
      ever rounding sun, to
      eventide, to sun"

   Absolutely beautiful.

   Hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

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