Open Poetry #15 |
Music To My Heart |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Your love is like a symphony Playing music to my heart Even though there is much distance Keeping you and I apart The distance becomes irrelevant As my heart calls out to you How it overflows with joy Whenever you come into view My dreams bring you right beside me In my dreams we're never apart As I count the amount of steps it takes To reach your kind and loving heart The pinnacles of passion we climb With such ease we reach its peak How entranced am I looking into your eyes As my knees suddenly feel so weak Your love is surely a gift That has been bestowed upon me How you warm my aching heart And set my spirit free Suetang |
||
© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved | |||
Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Your love is surely a gift That has been bestowed upon me Sue, very gentle smile, it sounds to me, like he is pretty dadgum lucky to have your love..Best to you |
||
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Suetang- this is lovely... enjoyed reading it.. ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
||
shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Lovely poem. Being apart can be hard but the reunion, wow!! Do not fear going forward slowly, |
||
MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A memorable melody, Sue... -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
||
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This is a very well done poem and I am sure that many can relate to it, especially with all the inter-action on the internet these days. Very, very nice. ~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~ |
||
kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
glad to know that some long-distance relationships work out. i do hope this is autobiographical |
||
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all so very much. I am very lucky to have many special people in my life. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |