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Open Poetry #15

Elusive

Jill
Member

since 2001-02-02

Posts 62
Louisiana

0 posted 2001-08-02 12:11 PM

So elusive
You are to me
Holding back
All that you feel
Afraid to let go
Release what is there
Look into my eyes
Find a love so deep and rare
When our eyes do connect
The spark does remain
Take me back into your heart
Let me love you again

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-08-02 12:12 PM

ah.. ellusive indeed.. nicely done Jill..

I enjoyed

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

2 posted 2001-08-02 12:43 PM

This is just beautiful!
Cindi

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

3 posted 2001-08-02 12:53 PM

well i hope your wish comes true!

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

4 posted 2001-08-02 12:57 PM

Well done. I imagine, if he is shy, he'll snap out of it soon. Enjoyed.
Sincerely,
Regina

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-08-02 02:56 PM

You know Jill I know a few women that I would consider elusive...not so sure if they are hiding their feelings, afraid to display them because they were hurt recently...or perhaps they don't have any feelings for me...James

Jill
Member

since 2001-02-02

Posts 62
Louisiana

6 posted 2001-08-02 07:29 PM

Thanks all for your very kind replies...and James you are correct, the feelings that used to be are no longer there.

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