Open Poetry #15 |
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The Question of Life |
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Savanna New Member
since 2001-07-31
Posts 6 |
The sunset casts along the shore, Two lovers walk into eternity forever more. Their hearts have become one,on that peaceful night, He gets down on one knee,knowing what he is doing is right. Expressions of love are shown in tears, "Will you be mine forever my sweet dear?" He places the ring upon her hand, She answers yes and they take a seat holding each other tightly in the soft sand. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Congratulations, Savanna...and thank you for sharing your first moment on that road with this lovely little poem. Welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a special greeting! Karilea |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderfully done, Savanna. Welcome to Passions! ![]() All writing comes |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice..and such a romantic picture painted... welcome to passions!! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions and keep writing! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sounds more to me like "The Answer to Life". . . ![]() welcome!!! Please pull up a chair and stay awhile. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Savanna...James |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Happy poem to start off at Passions with. Welcome. Sandra |
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blondeon Junior Member
since 2001-07-31
Posts 13 |
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN , AND SO NICELY EXPRESSED! KEEP WRITING. HUGS! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Savanna, Amen, Enjoyed and welcome. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Welcome to passions! This is great....Does that mean congratulations are in order too? Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
You have expressed a beautiful moment...thank you for sharing it with us ![]() ~Krista ![]() "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Welcome! This is a great visual of romantic love. I enjoyed! Bravo! ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Savanna~ Welcome to Passions ! I'm sure you will enjoy your stay~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Beautifully written and so romantic. Welcome!!! Throw your heart out in front of you |
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