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No Hesitation
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No Hesitation |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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No Hesitation I pray for time to slow yet how fast it goes yes, I wish I could freeze time and in that moment call it mine frozen things come to stand still this hourglass sand overflows to spill I want the sand to stop and wait but it flows on won’t hesitate "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 08-02-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes it would be nice at times to stop the flow of time..and capture for our savor a moment... a day... Nicely done... I enjoyed |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I do like your short line style, But in the first stanza I pray real slow for time flies how fast it goes perhaps, I pray for time to slow yet how fast it goes for the rhyme, and maybe that could be Flowing instead of flows on, Minor points, Good write. Gloom |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ty my professor.....done...helen |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Helen, yet again, I relate to your words. You have such a powerful gift to express so much in few words. It's a keeper~ Melissa~ |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
Sometimes I think time has passed me by. Then I count my blessings. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
I agree. This is very good. |
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