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Here, hearing
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Here, hearing |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Here, Hearing you call, in unspoken whisper, hand to breast palm to temple I hear you it is not that this ephemeral mist does not kiss your eyelid nor cheek daily nightly you, searching too intensely in your lost I am here do not pick up rock nor look behind door do not become so frantic that you miss my peace in whispers, I tease your smile awake by gentlest of touch, your heart beats in slender move, fingers reach now grow calm as deeper the fire begins the burn to blue you shall hear in the silence now drawing near to thee, seek me yet once again in solitude or in companion here, I am hearing you now… now pick up your pen and in this muted soft, in this contemplate of soul… envision… words they will come here, I am hearing you scratching…. the words return shining in your smile weep with me your gifts are beauty |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
this is a lovely poem... to have one listen so to you is indeed an idea I think many of us would love to embrace... someone is indeed lucky to have such an 'ear" listening. I enjoyed! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
To listen sufficiently to actually HEAR.. is a virtue... Nicely done, Lady..  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and your gifts to us are wonderful. . . I would think that even the most deaf of ears could hear such words. . . excellently done my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You express yourself well in this, and have a charismatic way with words here. A wonderful poem...I'm listening!  Melissa~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you call, in unspoken whisper, hand to breast palm to temple I hear you it is not that this ephemeral mist does not kiss your eyelid nor cheek daily nightly you, searching too intensely in your lost I am here ========================== now grow calm as deeper the fire begins the burn to blue you shall hear in the silence now drawing near to thee, seek me yet once again in solitude or in companion here, I am hearing you now… now pick up your pen and in this muted soft, in this contemplate of soul… envision… words they will come here, I am hearing you ================================= Oh my Lady...I am taking this one for my own... you write my hearts reflection...and the mirrors are beyond coincidence..... butterfly promises.... thank you for this beautiful inspire poetess Ladywhite  slow burn ... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
your writing stirs me giving greatest gift of all innermost feelings |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Lady, This is very beautiful and not only gives me a smile, but fills me with peace. Thank you. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh a tender flowing, as smooth as a mountain stream flowing around rocks...very lovely..very gentle smile |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady...your words here are like slow water, beautiful and serene. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lady In White- This is just lovely..  So soft and tender...it whispers... Wonderful.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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