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Dream Weaver's Spell
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Dream Weaver's Spell |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
"Dream Weaver's Spell" night shrouds, spirits lift through clouds, minds drift soul flys, breaks free closed eyes, yet see. sleep feeds, hope lives wish seeds, faith gives love gleams, all's well Weave dreams, magic spell. [This message has been edited by MoonShadow (edited 08-10-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Almost perfect [one small typo...] but I enjoyed! |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Thank you Milady for the comment. Sighted typo.... corrected same. :-) |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
You are a weaver of dreamy thoughts...very delightful! ~~sigh~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh! This is sooo good. Love this style of writing. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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RoseThorn New Member
since 2001-08-28
Posts 5US - NY |
very beautiful... extremely dreamy =) it sparks the imagination! ~Every Rose Has It's Thorn...~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MoonShadow~ Very effectively done~ Easy cadence - nice~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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