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Isabel my Delilah
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Isabel my Delilah |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost: Isabel my Delilah Has sheared the passions from my brain To the shape of a cull-de-sac Whose nature is the single lane The one way in and no way back. It starts a simple roundelay As lyric stirs a gentle brew. Frivolous as a breeze in play And lethal as a deadly coup. Driving home what crass impales, Contusions damage the beach Where pain engraves the details Breaching the mind with its leach. I opened a pandora's box Exposed the contents under lid. A cauldron full of paradox That's mummified my very id. There is no doubt she rules the den For she's sheered my locks once again. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Geez, better build a study over the garage, with one key. Behind every great man is a great woman, maybe should keep this one in front of you. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
me thinks ya need to give your rose of suppose some raspberry tea and poetry  Even when youre in the dog house... you write cooler than cool ... love the word play and clever verbiage in this Stinky. Take Isabel and Randy to the beach for a picnic slow burn ... |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
take away the sharp from thee and let this man's locks flow free for his strength is our desire and his loss brings us our dire |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
LOL - You probably NEEDED the trim, Sy...*hugs*..LOL.. Give Isabel a hug for me too..  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
hey, I live on a cul-de-sac and my husband went bald a long time ago, what does that say about little ole me!  " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RSWells, Something to think about. LOL JM, She likes raspberry tea but not poetry. Shes no Tinkerbell, LOL Lady, Clever retort. *L* Nan, You don't understand, the cull-de-sac is perminant. LOL Hugs and kisses. Irish, It means you have a Samson on your hands. LOL |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Pure thought vitamins, Sy... I find it frightening, however, if/when a significant other does not/cannot/will not relate to an artist's needs... makes me think of the term "irreconcilable differences"... A strong depiction, in either case... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark, Thank you so much for the read and wonderful comment. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
OOOhh, she's vicious! I hope you recovered! I like the way you expressed this strength stealer. Sincerely, Regina |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rwood, LOL she does come on heavy sometimes. Thanks for the read. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--Care not I for lock or curl, your strength is in the words you hurl. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, If you see this reply go back 4 or 5 pages and take a look at " The knave " and let me know if you like it? Thank you for this comment. |
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