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My First Haiku
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My First Haiku |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Ink coagulates In securities of thought Paper binds them all (Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON) "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
And hopefully many more, my friend...well done..gentle smile |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WOW, this is a beauty Mark, write on  Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
It sure does Mark, and good job with the new form. Sandra |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Bravo!!! nicely said and done... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow! Well done! And you say that this is your first haiku?! You blow me away  Melissa~ |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
A blessing so small as paper and pen. You have done a great job! I don't know styles, I think I should visit workshop. Creativity abounds! Sincerely, Regina |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Logan, thank you very much. This is a natural extension to the "TWENTY OR LESS" series, and I still find the minimalism a liberating challenge. I'm REALLY starting to appreciate the word "simple", lately. Titia -- glad you enjoyed and thank you for the thumbs up... more will be on their way. Thank you, Sandra -- this is fun! Ron -- just exploring "new" territory... thanks for the encouragement. Melissa: thank you, kindly. Well -- I wrote one once way back in high school, if that counts, but this is the first on this site and in quite the while. Glad you liked. Regina, sometimes it's very gratifying to wander outside of one's patterns and absorb new vistas -- this is just a tiny example of doing so, and may I say, I'm enjoying the stroll? Thanks for the read and reply. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Mark, You seem to find perfection in each new venue you explore. Enjoyed very much.. Elise |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
This is your first haiku? I don't believe it! hehe, very impressive Mark. You used this form quite skillfully . ~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Elise -- perfection? Nah... but: I try to do well in all my pursuits. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the high compliment. Krista: Yup. I like its simplicity and minimalism -- much faster and easier to express and leave wide open spaces for interpretation than with my traditional styles... Sometimes less is ALL you "need"... Thanks for the nice response. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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