Open Poetry #15 |
the Will |
Samia Junior Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 47Earth of corse! |
Trembling in the breadth of arms held wide inside the grip of the wind mad and raging, my hair billows freely above and around me curving and moving against the sky. From branches of trees half gone, my clothes dangle like rags tossed from me. I am naked and all the world is all I have! my bones and skin unhidden, and my heart free and unsheltered I accept this embrace with arms held wide in the breadth and grip of the storm. Every texture is a symphony in a hurricane whose Will is unharnessed. in the grip of the storm my heart beats. in the breadth of arms held wide i breath. |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Hey, another storm lover. I like this, Samia! I like the sense of it. "I am naked and all the world is all I have!" Nice line. Well done! \\ |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Just you and nature. Great depiction of being vulnerable and willing as well. Enjoyed. Sincerely, Regina |
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Samia Junior Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 47Earth of corse! |
Wondering glider and Regina, Thanks for the kind words, I love storms. Even though I've never been caught naked in a storm, I wouldn't put myself past it! I love everything about them, the build up of the clouds, the wind coming up, the heat (in summer) and then the downpoor, the thunder and the lightning. Thanks again, Samia |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done. I could feel the thunder in your words. Write on. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
To surrender to the wind..... You have just expressed it all so beautifully and powerfully...... Thank you ************************** |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done..captures the image and power quite well... |
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