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Moon Child |
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Samia Junior Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 47Earth of corse! |
The moon was full and golden like a womb lit with a fire from within, where the shadows are of the child growing inside, Against a dark wheat bread dough full and raising. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is glorious! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Snooganzmeister32 Member
since 2001-07-17
Posts 67Cali, USA |
loverly |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
The sounds in this are superb. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
agree with Bob.. this sounds lovely to the ear.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Samia~ Poems of perceptions of the moon intrigue me. This is ripe with imagery. Very, very nicely done. *Applause* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Samia, Nice write, enjoyed |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Samia My Goodness, your imagery and thought in this is outstanding! Well done~ Melissa~ |
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Samia Junior Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 47Earth of corse! |
Irish Rose, Snooganzmeister, RMW, Cpat Hair, Marge, Seymore and Melissa - Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I said this poem outloud before I wrote it down. I was walking my dog at night and the moon was full and low in the sky, so I was inspired to "write" a poem in my head, and this is what happened. Go figure. Thanks again! And long live the poet in us all. ~Samia |
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