Open Poetry #15 |
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The Other Side |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone ![]() |
![]() Another wakeful night, the woman rose dreamlike, she thought she heard the mirror call she placed her hand upon the crackled glass and felt herself slowly begin to fall. She saw a flash, and rushing scenes passed by a scream of terror, who would ever save- then peace, a feeling she had never known pushed back the fear, and held her like a babe. She stared in awe to see an ancient throne upon it sat an angel, fierce and strong He gestured to her, told her all was well for she was home, after a wait so long. He pulled her close and told her of the truths gave answers to her endless questioning no longer must she live lonely and sad "Listen to me, cannot you hear hearts sing?" She looked back towards the past, just one quick glance and said goodbye to all the hate and lies then turned and sank into her angels arms and left behind her world of pain and sighs. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 07-30-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely told tale.... I enjoyed the imagery and the read.... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
An interesting take... Hopefully, she'll find happiness there. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, Beautiful and sad imagery read here. Wonderful write. Love, Elise |
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polarflame New Member
since 2001-07-30
Posts 9Az, USA |
Awesome poetry...... it depicts sadness and yet it boasts of hope. Sometimes, I too pondered when my angel will take me away from this forsaken lands. But for now, I enjoy what life has to offer. ------------------------ the heart is an organ of fire... >>PolarFlame |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
She looked back towards the past, just one quick glance and said goodbye to all the hate and lies then turned and sank into her angels arms and left behind her world of pain and sighs. At last, she found peace. Beautifully written. ![]() All writing comes |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, and his name was Acceptance..sorry I missed this one earlier, for it is a very good write and a excellent study..good for you, Sandra...very gentle smile |
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