Open Poetry #15 |
In My Remember |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
In My Remember ~*Marge Tindal*~ In my remember there is a place where softest dreams are kept Inviting me to traipse among recall of fragrant violet Perfuming visions waft on breezes blown in such gentle caress Surround of fragrance in whiffs of you with stir of memory I am blessed Lacey handkerchief once worn delicately arrayed upon lapel Woman of graceful demeanor scents from deepest well Thoughtful gestures tucked away by the hands of one who knew That in my remember I would need to plunder fragrant thoughts of you~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This reminded me of my grandmother...are you sure we aren't somehow related?! Sweet, tender and soooooo beautiful!! |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Fragrant thoughts of you...I often associate certain smell with memories, this spells out a lovely way of saying so! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh Marge, large memories looming...thank you for this... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
dang.....there go the tears.......making my heart ache.....soft Marge, delicate, and so loving..... today I needed this thank you |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
well done maiden mine to conjure memories of the past thru the fragrances of today awesome~ |
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Snooganzmeister32 Member
since 2001-07-17
Posts 67Cali, USA |
That in my remember I would need to plunder fragrant thoughts of you~ Lovely, dear. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
This is so softly wonderful and stirs memory ....perfumed memory..... Lovely.... Thank you ****************** |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
When all is said and done, the memories are all that we have..what a lovely one..very tender gentle smile for your thoughts and for the one remembered..hugs to you Marge for your tenderness |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Marge This was so beautiful, I could almost smell the heavenly scent. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Yep ! We are ... right at the heart~ AZBlond~ Thank you so much. Karilea~ Sharing with caring~ *Hugs* SEA~ *Hugs* Well, lovie ... there's a scented kerchief to dry those tears. SoaringEagle~ Thank you, my love. Just knowing that you share my thoughts is such joy. Rikki~ Thank you. SEE ! Someone DID read your home page ! MyEnchantedMelody~ I appreciate your thoughts. Logan~ Yes, love ... and so grateful that we have them. *Hugs* for you. SueTang~ Thank you, hon. Memories are like that ... 'heavenly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Well, I'm finally here, and you already KNOW I love this beauty. So softly and and lovingly written...nobody 'remembers' quite like yoo. love and hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
Oh Marge, I miss my gramma so much--(she was "lily of the valley")thanks for helping my remember. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Teary eyed! with sighs hugs and love... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
HEY!!!!!!!!!!! I have a "Scarf" of remember!!!!!!!!! Does that count? Seriously my dear friend. I loved this one and of course I love how you always so effortlessly voice the feelings you hold deep within you. Now don't go turning that around on me, okay? gv ge yuhi!!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--What beautiful, lace edged thoughts. You leave me with my own remember...thank you for that. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
plunder not your thoughts taste them as a fine liqueur savoring nuance |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
A sweet scented reverie, worth keeping for all time! This one is tucked gently in my remember. Sincerely, Regina |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Marge! You have such a way with words!! loved it! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Marge, this is just so beautiful, oh how I love this one~ Melissa~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ You are music to my heart. Love n' hugs~ Constance~ It's so easy to draw on the essence of remember. Thank you for letting me share. Serenity~ And to you a *hug*. Mark~ You didn't think I'd forget, did you ? gv ge yuhi Martie~ Softly remembering with you~ *Hugs* InterLoper~ You pen such sweet replies. Thank you. RWood~ Thank you so much for enjoying the share. Cindi~ This heart, this heart ... she remembers so well. *Hugs* Melissa~ You know that I appreciate you. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Oh Marge...this is beautiful. You have stirred up memories for me with this one! Hugs, ~Krista "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Marge...I love this one! I was fortunate enough to get all of my Grandma's handkerchiefs...I treasure them! I agree with the other readers...thank you for putting into words what my perfumed memory will never forget. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmittenKitten~ Thank you for letting me know it stirred memories for you. Janette~ What a wonderous gift to have~ I am blessed with having those of my great grandmother and my mother. Each held in tenderest fragrant recall. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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