The Way the Moon Shows Off Your Eyes Why it's Just Paradise!...Part Deaux

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Open Poetry #15

The Way the Moon Shows Off Your Eyes Why it's Just Paradise!...Part Deaux

wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2001-07-12 03:18 PM

The way the moon plays off your eyes
I would say is paradise
Stars that shine for heaven’s show
Can only match our afterglow
We are swans so rare and fine
We form a heart with yours and mine
But I digress, its you, whose blessed
You, the world and I, your guest

Cupid’s bow and Saint Valentine
Would like to know that you are mine
The angels fight for good and vice
Would drop their swords in sacrifice
And reconcile their age-old fight
To give the land to Canaanites
But most of all, our God would weep
If all your love was mine to keep

So if the world should end my dear
I would not mind, with you right here
For I can see within your eyes
Lands of fruit and paradise
And most of all we cannot fail
Our love could be the Holy Grail
Drink with me to love divine
Tell me dear that you’ll be mine

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 07-12-2001).]

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

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1 posted 2001-07-12 03:28 PM

Awww, Walt, a love poem! Very sweet, my friend, yuh!

Cor

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

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2 posted 2001-07-12 03:38 PM

wunnerful, wunnerful

thought this was maybe going to be a rewrite, but it's a whole new piece that I enjoyed so very much

Lighthousebob
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3 posted 2001-07-12 06:06 PM

A very nice love poem for your very special Valintine...
She had to love it!!! Right? I mean with the two swans
and the Holy Grail, who could miss.... A very nice job
presenting this one in both words and picture. -Bob

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-07-13 04:49 AM

Nice flow of romance here...James

Temptress

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5 posted 2001-07-13 06:45 AM

I love your romance writing, Walty!

wayoutwalt
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6 posted 2001-07-13 07:53 AM

thank you guys o yuh

Paula Finn
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7 posted 2001-07-13 11:31 AM

Oh you...quite the opposite of the pther friend...this is stupendous...the imagery...the idea...again I say she is a lucky lady

elisaseyes
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8 posted 2001-07-13 11:48 PM

Fooooooooor meeeeeeeeeee?

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