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Forever Mine
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Forever Mine |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: Forever Mine She knelt besides the waters edge Looking deep surmise. Watching coral gardens flow and Swimming butterflies. Sketched her with my fountain pen each Stroke became alive. Etched it in my mind as well to Make it to survive. Stole a moment of her time for Future idolize Something more than whimsy dream to Stay before my eyes Now I hold the black and white with Tears that never dry Alone by the waters edge of Swimming butterflies. A moment of ageless shrine that Is forever mine? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Nicely done Seymour.. I enjoyed!!! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Picture perfect, Sy....I can envision it all....a most lovely garden, with swimming butterflies.... among the lilies.... beneath the willows.... an Impressionist's delight.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair, Thank you for the read and enjoy. Lady, Elaborate dressing for a poem thank you. *L* |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Love the image within.....beautiful!!! Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, Love the comment, beautiful. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A lasting image and a lovely tribute. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She knelt besides the waters edge Looking deep surmise. Watching coral gardens flow and Swimming butterflies. Sketched her with my fountain pen each Stroke became alive. Etched it in my mind as well to Make it to survive. Stole a moment of her time for Future idolize Something more than whimsy dream to Stay before my eyes ==========================================   ~Forever In Time ... Forever In Rhyme ... Forever Mine~ He writes his heart and soul with pen sincere verses of the kind of love we all wish to realize He wistfully pens his rhyme scheme dreams words of his rose of suppose, rainbows and butterflies Like the artist that he is with both brush and pen he paints for us the Shangri-La and Eden in his mind He holds our hand as we walk on his beaches of understand and he takes us to places where all is peaceful and kind He is indeed idolized by the butterflies they put him on a pedestal of wisdom's shrine Engraving his grace in the forever of time and space and promising he'll never part this butterfly heart of mine jm *winkiewinkie*    Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour  I'm keeping this one wow, love this |
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WhiteDragon Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 70O-town, Fl |
Beautiful poem, man. Thanks, Jeremy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RSWells, Thank you. JM, I'll write you tonight. Sea, That is great and sweet of you. Thanks. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--You have painted this scene in my mind..it is beautiful! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You are forever a wonderful artist... penning visage or rhyme, Sweet Sy..  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This is absolutely beautiful...may the color come to your black and white and bless your life with the beauty of this piece. Even if it's a fictional tale, it's lovely. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jeremy, Thank you for the beautiful. Martie, That's quite an accomplishment. *L* VAS, What a lovely comment. Nan, Nan I dub thee Nightingale The spirit that moves this web. The angel behind the veil. That tenders the flow and ebb. Comforts us and holds us dear Tip toes through the words that be For each a pat on the rear Put in proper light to see. Tireless your light and bright Do soft compress to our fear Tend us like a fairy might Sending each a ray of cheer. Your an angel in disguise Without enough of cognize. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Stole a moment of her time for Future idolize Something more than whimsy dream to Stay before my eyes very softly written Seymour "Here I am in prison,here I am with a ball and chain There is whiskey in the jar-o" Traditional irish song. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Brian, Thank you for the boost back and kind words. It's one of my favorites. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sir Sy, this is gorgeous writing, of course my library must have it, and I'm stealing that randy dragon magical muse of yours too  Melissa~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, Big thanks for the gorgeous and you can borrow my Randy muse any time you want. *L* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ My stars above ! ! You just get better and better ! I think this one jumps close to the top of the charts of my favorites from you. Fabulous ! Love n' hugs n' stuff~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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